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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Iam learning english to imorove my communaction skills and to make friends from globe.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning english to improve my communication skills and to make friends from globe.

 

I am learning english to improve my communication skills and to make friends "from other parts of the world." would be more appropriate!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English to imporove my communiacation skills and (to) make friends from around the globe.

 

The word in the parenthesis () is optional.

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I am learning English to improve/ improve upon my communciation skills and make friends around the world. 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Iam learning english to imorove my communaction skills and to make friends from globe.

Correction: I am learning English to improve my communication skills and to make friends from around the world.

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