italki - is it correct? - You can find different kind of persons even students unemployed. Fresh , imaginativ

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is it correct? - You can find different kind of persons even students unemployed. Fresh , imaginative, passionate all-aged students -even without experience- that have the desire and the enthusiasm to put themselves on probation and grow with us. This is a road that could lead you even to your next lifestyle. What is really important is(or are?) the life and the heart. - How many times you thought that some situations can be experienced only by the characters of a movie or in a fiction? - I come from an environment completely different from the artistic one , a place where numbers and schedules prevailed and there was no space for ideas.

2012년 11월 4일 오전 9:03

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Is this correct?

- You can find different kinds of <s>persons</s> people even students who are unemployed; fresh, imaginative, passionate students of all ages <s>-even without</s> who have no experience, but <s>that </s>have the desire and the enthusiasm to <s>put themselves on probation and</s> grow <s>with us</s>. This is a road that could lead you <s>even</s> to <s>your next </s>a better lifestyle. What is really important is the life and heart of the individual (I would expend on this idea here as shown)
- How many times have you thought that some situations can be experienced only by the characters of a movie or in <s>a</s> fiction?
- I come from an environment completely different from the artistic one, a place where numbers and schedules prevailed and there was no space for ideas.