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just say hello hi,everyone, so long no here, hope everyone is better. now i work in a trading company,which sells aluminium foil, i met lots of questions, because i'm lack of experiences. hope someone can help me.
2012년 11월 16일 오전 2:43
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Just Say Hello

Hieveryone. It has been so long no since I have been here. I hope everyone is better.
Now I work in a trading company which sells aluminium foil. I met have lots of questions, because I'm lack of experiences. I hope someone can help me.

 

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