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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am I am a normal man Only in this world I have no brother or sister or mother or father or friend or friendly Family of dead 15-year - I'm sad for that Dear Why do I say to you I do not know I'm just sad man

2010년 9월 18일 오후 6:24

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

<strike>I am </strike>I am a normal man. I am alone in this world. I have no brother or sister or mother or father or friend or friendly. My family has been dead for 15-years.
I'm sad because of that.
Why am I telling you this?
I don't know.
I'm just feeling sad.

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2010년 10월 17일

i am sad to hear that though I wonder how it happened but I believe you can still find a new family sooner or later. I wish you well and may you'll find true friends along the way to comfort you on your loss. If you like I can be your virtual friend^_^...

2013년 5월 8일

Hello, My name is maris, which is really nice to get on this site, I took interest in you after reading your profile at (www.italki.com). ([email protected]) I believe age and distance has nothing to do with love, so just drop me an email through my private e-mail address ([email protected]), so that we can communicate better and I send you my images. Thank you. maris.

2013년 4월 14일