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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am I am a normal man Only in this world I have no brother or sister or mother or father or friend or friendly Family of dead 15-year - I'm sad for that Dear Why do I say to you I do not know I'm just sad man
2010년 9월 18일 오후 6:24
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

<strike>I am </strike>I am a normal man. I am alone in this world.   I have no brother or sister or mother or father or friend or friendly.  My family has been dead for 15-years.
I'm sad because of that.
Why am I telling you this? 
I don't know. 

I'm just  feeling sad.

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2010년 10월 17일
i am sad to hear that though I wonder how it happened but I believe you can still find a new family sooner or later. I wish you well and may you'll find true friends along the way to comfort you on your loss. If you like I can be your virtual friend^_^...
2013년 5월 8일
Hello, My name is maris, which is really nice to get on this site, I took interest in you after reading your profile at (www.italki.com). ([email protected]) I believe age and distance has nothing to do with love, so just drop me an email through my private e-mail address ([email protected]), so that we can communicate better and I send you my images. Thank you. maris.
2013년 4월 14일
No kidding,PLS.if you say that true ,i'm so sorry to hear that.but i hope you 'r kidding
2010년 11월 1일
hii sorry to hear that u lost all of ur family :( we all can be ur sisters and brothers ... even a family .. don't feel sad
2010년 9월 19일
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