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On my way home
I take the subway to work everyday. It takes 40 minutes (to get to my job)
I know that 40 minutes is long time to stand while doing nothing, so I get on facebook or read books. Some people say it is harmful to my eyes to read books on the subway, and I agree.
Anyway, it is important how I read the book, too. I want to read book while sitting on the seat. And, many cases, I sit down and read a book. But I found out today, that there were many old men in the subway. They were all salary men. I thought that... someday, I will be an old salary man, and think about my family whom believe that I will bring money to them for living and education, and special dishes on special days. Yes, I saw my future through them.
If I am young, I will standing in the subway.
If I sit down, maybe, I will be old then.
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