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Frodo
Today I meet volonteers who take care of abused ,abandoned dogs ,I decided of
Take into custody Frodo an afraid dog ,he doesn't have contacts whith peolpe ,he
Doesn't have no more confidence in humans,I hope to return his whit my love
Frodo
Today I met volunteers who take care of abused and abandoned dogs. I decided to take Frodo, a frightened dog (afriad dog doesn't sound right) into my custody. Frodo hasn't (I think you mean hasn't here not doesn't) had contact with people and so he doensn't have confidence in humans. I hope that if I love him, his confidence in humans will return.
Bene! Note: complete thoughts must be separated by a peiod or a ; (semi-colon) unless joined by and, but, then, or other joining words. Complete thoughts may not be separated with commas. This difference is hard for me with l'italiano!
esempio:
Today I met volunteers who take care of abused and abandoned dogs. (This is a complete thought with both subject and predicate) I decided to take Frodo, a frightened dog, into my custody. (This is another complete thought).
O join both thoughts with and
Today I met volunteers who take care of abused and abandoned dogs and I decided to take Frodo, a frightened dog, into my custody.
O, even better, use when plus comma:
Today, when I met volunteers who take care of abused and abandoned dogs, I decided to take Frodo into custody.
You are doing great! ciao!
Frodo
Today I meet volunteers who take care of abused and abandoned dogs. I decided of to take Frodo into custody Frodo. He is a frightened an afraid dog and he doesn't have contacts whith people.
He doesn't have no more any confidence in humans so I hope to return this (or his confidence) whit with my love.
Frodo
Today I met volonteers who take care of abused and abandoned dogs. I decided to take care of Frodo, an afraid dog. He doesn't make much contact with people. He doesn't have confidence in humans. I hope to return his confidence with my love.
Seems like you had an interesting day! Try separating your ideas into individual sentences.
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