The season of job hunting 1
The job hunting in my country has just started. A mountain of university students are changing their casual clothes to black suits and go to some seminars to gain companies’ information. In my case I have already finished the job hunting when I was in 3rd year and now I am waiting for the graduation. Today I met my Bengali friend working for a convenience store as a part timer. He is also the one who has started the job hunting. After we briefly exchanged our current situation, he asked me for some advises about the job hunting. I told him “you should be honest with interviewers and tell them what you have done while you are in the university. They want to know what hardships you overcame to achieve your goal and through those hardships how you grew up. Moreover you need to let them know your personal advantage and disadvantage honestly. In this part, just be yourself. Don’t be just like other nice guys. Be honest.”
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The season of job hunting 1
TheJob hunting in my country has just started (begun). A mountain of university students are changing from their casual clothes to black suits and to go to some seminars to gain companies’ information. to go to company seminars and get information about employment.
In my case, I have already finished the job hunting when I was in my 3rd year and now I am waiting for the graduation.
Today I met my Bengali friend who is working for a convenience store as a part timer. He is also the one who has started the job hunting. (the job hunting process)
After we briefly exchanged our current situation (caught up with eachother), he asked me for some advises advice about the job hunting.
I told him, “you should be honest with interviewers and tell them what you have done while you are in the university. They want to know what hardships you overcame to achieve your goal and through those hardships how you grew up.
Moreover you need to let them know your personal advantages (strong points, assets) and disadvantage (weak points faults) honestly.
In this part, just be yourself. Don’t be just like other nice guys. Be honest.”
Im glad I dont have to do 就職活動！大変そう！アメリカでWe don't have a job hunting season. In fact, I think Japan is the only country with this custom.
Good luck at your new job after graduation! What will you do?
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Sorry I am not a native speaker of English, you know that :P But hope everything is fine with you
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Thank you so much Mr. Markus!
I really appreciate your comment!
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I think it's...: in a convenience story;;some advice;;while you were in university. Apart from those 3 little flaw-backs, it's very good English. But native speakers might find more to correct.
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