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Mother's death Several days ago I was working with my laptop and my mother was near heater, suddenly her hairs attracted me and I saw number of her hairs are white then I said to myself :" one day she had black hairs and in future those hairs will be become white and white and white and At last all of her hairs " , I hate white because white will tell me:"one day you will miss your mother " and I love Black because, it tell me" your Mother is still young and beautiful " , I tried to control myself because I do not like my Mother see my tears , I wish to die before my Mother because I can not see her death :'( Is your Mother still alive? Is all her hairs white?
2012년 12월 13일 오후 4:05
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Mother's death

Several days ago, I was working with my laptop and my mother was near the heater, and suddenlyher hairs attracted me and I saw noticed that a number of her hairs are were white. then I said to myself, :"one day she once had only black hairs, and but in future time all of those hairs will be become whiter and whiter and white and until, At last finally, all of her hairs will be white." , I hate white because white will tells me: "one day you will miss lose your mother," and I love Bblack, because, it tells me: "your Mmother is still young and beautiful." ,

I tried to control myself because I do not like my Mmother seeing my tears,.
I wish want to die before my Mmother does because then I can will not see her death.
:'(
Is your Mmother still alive?
Is Are all her hairs white?

 

 

I'm sorry to hear that! :( I hope this correction helps you though~

2013년 3월 6일
i knew that you did love you mom, good guy. But one mom"s biggest dream is her child being healthy, so the things we can do are taking care of ourselves to ease our mom"s worries and cherishing the days we can spend with her .Anyway,boy, you are a dutiful child, god bless both of you
2013년 5월 25일
My mom passed away when I was 15! She died because of a malign tumor in her brain (
2013년 4월 3일
For a mother, the bitterest issue that can happen to her is to lose her kids. I got two kids living in Russia. You can't even imagine how much a mother suffers when her kids are far away from her. But the death of kids destroys mothers! Do you want her to suffer in your grief? Of course not! So I want you to ask god longer life for both of you and remember… all of mothers prefer to die instead of being alive and see their kids get buried. They will be crushed! God bless both of you )
2013년 4월 3일
u are a sensible boy
2013년 3월 6일
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