What do you think?
I do not know why that should be, of course, but the sight of another man sleeping in his bed, when I woke up, made me mad. It seems to me so shocking to see the bright hours of life - brilliant moments that will never come back to it again - wasted in a stupid dream.
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What do you think?
I do not know why that (наверное лучше сказать "this") should be, of course, but the sight of another man sleeping in his bed, when I woke up, made me mad. It seems to me so shocking to see the bright hours of life - brilliant moments that will never come back to it again - wasted in a stupid dream.
Почти все правильно. Только одна проблема, которая есть у много русских человеков- не нужно так много запятых на английском языке.
Например: На русском- "Я не знаю, что ты хочешь делать, когда идет дождь, в том городе, куда мы сейчас пойдем.
На английском- "I don't know what you want to do when it rains in that town we're going to now."
На русском, много запятых нужни, но как вы можете видеть, на английском обычно эти не нужно так часто.
Кроме того, отлично! Вы это сам написали? Молодец! Удачи вам!
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What do you think?
I do not know why THIS should be, of course, but the sight of another man sleeping in his bed, when I woke up, made me mad.
If this is a general observation about life, you need to write "when I have woken up, MAKES me mad" - present simple for general observations :)
It seems to me so shocking to see the bright hours of life - brilliant moments that will never come back to it again - wasted in a stupid dream.
Will never come back again
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Sylvia, do you think it matters in this case? :))
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Whose bed was it? His bed or her bed?
Very good English,keep learning!
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But only partially.
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