Careful people can avoid illness this was my English exam question:- write a paragraph of seven sentences about (Careful people can avoid illness) that is what i wrote: It's now clear th

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Careful people can avoid illness this was my English exam question:- write a paragraph of seven sentences about (Careful people can avoid illness) that is what i wrote: It's now clear that our health plays a very important role in our life and we can't do without it.From this point careful people spare no effort to avoid illness. To avoid illness we should remember some rules.First of all we should always wash our hands ofter and before a meal.We should wash more often in hot weather or when we have been to a gym. We mustn't eat food that smiles bad as it may be poisonous.We should always cover our food so flies can't pass their germs on to it . We should boil tap water before drinking it to kill any germs. We must try not to eat food from cans as it may be bad. If we do so,we will have a good health and never suffer from illness. any mistakes?

2013년 1월 16일 오전 11:47

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Use of contractions in formal speech (including exams and essays) with some exceptions - see the link http://www.yourdictionary.com/dictionary-articles/using-contractions.html

2013년 2월 11일

* before and after a meal

2013년 1월 18일

Careful people can avoid illness

this was my English exam question:-
write a paragraph of seven sentences about (Careful people can avoid illness)
that is what i wrote:

It's now clear that our health plays a very important role in our life and we can't do without it.From this point As a result of this, careful people spare no effort to avoid illness.
To avoid illness we should remember some rules. First of all we should always wash our hands ofter and before a meal. We should wash more often in hot weather or when we have been to a the gym.
We mustn't eat food that smiles smells bad as it may be poisonous. We should always cover our food so that flies can't pass their germs on to it. We should boil tap water before drinking it to kill any germs. We must try not to eat food from cans as it may be bad.
If we do so,we will have a good health and never suffer from illness.

any mistakes?