The Feeling OF The First Week
When I came back to school, I felt everything here was so familiar.
But compared to last semester, I feel quite different. First, it is more challenging for me to study my lessons. All the subjects become more difficult. Take my English course for example, we start to learn how to write a wonderful composition, which didn't require last semester. For another, all of my teachers have put forward higher request. It seems that my burden becomes more heavier suddenly. As a result, my own free time will let up. I need to pay more attention to my study.
Everything will be all right. In a word, I have the confidence to keep a balance between study and extracurricular activities.
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The Feeling OF The First Week
When I came back to school, I felt everything here was so familiar.
However, compared to last semester, I feel quite different. First, it is more challenging for me to study my lessons. All the subjects have become more difficult. Take my English course for example, we started to learn how to write a wonderful composition, which wasn't required last semester. Also, all of my teachers have put forward higher requests. It seems that my burden becomes heavier, suddenly. As a result, my own free time will be less. I need to pay more attention to my studies.
Everything will be all right. In a word, I have the confidence to keep a balance between study and extracurricular activities.
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Other than the minor typos I corrected, your English is very good. I love that your post was coherent. You are right, everything will be all right. I'm glad you have that confidence, and I'm sure you'll do well :)
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