Fishermen on ice
There is a lot of snow everywhere. But it's March, and the days are getting longer, and it's getting warmer. There is a river near my house. It has fishermen on it. They drill holes in the ice and fish. I call them penguins. Everyday they have less places to fish. This is because the ice melts. And fish on ice will be finished soon.
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Ice fishermen
There is a lot of snow everywhere. But it's March, and the days are getting longer, and it's getting warmer. There is a river near my house with It has fishermen on it. They drill holes in the ice and fish. I call them penguins. Everyday they have fewer less places to fish, This is because the ice is melting. Soon, ice fishing for the year will be over. And fish on ice will be finished soon.
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