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A text about my favourite soccer player
My favourite soccer player is Critiano Ronaldo.He played for Real Madrid.He's 27 years old. He's tall and muscular. He has a lot of teammates.His teammates are KaKa, Ozil, Benzema ,C asillas ,...Everyone are wonderful.But i sad because he'll leave Real Madrid to play for Manchester United.I convention he will not leave Real Madrid.
2013년 3월 14일 오전 10:38
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A text about my favourite soccer player
My favourite soccer player is Critiano Ronaldo.He played for Real Madrid.He's 27 years old. He's tall and muscular. He has a lot of teammates.His teammates are KaKa, Ozil, Benzema ,C asillas ,...Everyone is wonderful.But i sad because he'll leave Real Madrid to play for Manchester United.I convention he will not leave Real Madrid.
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2013년 3월 14일
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