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My dream is to travel to paris,France If I have ten days to travel a place, I will choose Paris, France. Why? First, French food is very famous around the world. The food there is not only delicious but also beautiful. It’s just like an excellent painting. The cook decorates the food with colorful things, It must be very enjoyable to have a dinner there. Second, It is a very fashionable city, I’d like to watch a fashion show and buy some beautiful clothes and also enjoy the beauty of this wonderful place. Third,Paris is a city full of culture and history, there are a lot of wonderful museums and buildings,for example; Louvre Museum,the Eiffel Tower, the triumphal Arc and so on. especially <Mona lisa> the painting everyone wants to have a look at her secret smile. That’s why I wa

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My dream is to travel to Paris, France

If I would have ten days to travel anywhere, I would choose Paris, France. Why?
First, French food is very famous around the world. The food there is not only delicious but also beautiful. It’s just like an excellent painting. The chefs decorate the food with colorful things. It must be very enjoyable to have a dinner there.
Second, it is a very fashionable city. I’d like to watch a fashion show and buy some beautiful clothes and also enjoy the beauty of this wonderful place.
Third, Paris is a city full of culture and history, there are a lot of wonderful museums and buildings, for example: The Louvre Museum, the Eiffel Tower, the triumphal Arc and so on. Especially The Mona Lisa, one of the most famous paintings of the world; everyone wants to have a look at her secret smile.
That’s why I want to go Paris

 

 

Hey, this is excellent. I'd like to visit Paris, too. It must be a beautiful city, as you've said.

Good job :)

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