tammyads
のみもの-----drink hello how are you こんにちはおげんきですか i am fine わたしげんきです thankyou for reading ありがとおによみ yummy strawberry drink おいしいのみものいちご sorry if ther are any mistakes I keep trying to improve any feedback will be greatly apreciated thankyou :)
2013년 5월 9일 오후 5:02
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のみもの-----drink

hello how are you
こんにちはおげんきですか

i am fine
わたしげんきです

thankyou for reading
ありがとおによみ → よんでくれてありがとうございます(よんでくださってありがとうございます is more polite.)

The very direct translation is よむことをありがとうございます but it isn't good nor natural. 

(To make sentences natural, we sometimes need to add other words, other times we have to change them or get them off.)

yummy strawberry drink
おいしいのみものいちご → おいしい いちごの のみもの

sorry if ther are any mistakes I keep trying to improve any feedback will be greatly apreciated thankyou :)  → Don't worry about it! We are here to study languages. ;)

 

Hi Tammyads,

Since your language is very differnt from ours, sometimes remembering whole the sentences without translating each words is good. Please do not forget putting 。at the end of the sentences. Keep up your study! 

 

 

2013년 5월 9일
Oh...yh...! How amazing!!! ^^~ Good luck in your Japanese learning! :D~
2013년 5월 10일
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