My study plan
Study Plan
Sepehr Gharaaty
Accepted by Prof. Suong Van Hoa, Master of Science in Mechanical Engineering
Department of Mechanical Engineering, Concordia University, Montreal, Quebec
Why do you wish to study in Canada in the program for which you have been accepted?
Canada has one of the best educational systems and among is home to some of the most famous universities all around in the world. I believe, for me it is a great opportunity to study studying in Canada is a great opportunity for me, especially in at Concordia University under supervision of Prof. Suong Van Hoa. This it is an opportunity which can help me to improve the academic and practical knowledge that I need in my country to be successful in my country. Furthermore, having graduated from Canada would certainly help me to find a prosperous work position in my country, as North American Universities are all accredited in Iran. It definitely would be my honor to continue my studies in Mechanical Engineering (Master of Science) under supervision of Prof. Suong Van Hoa.
What is your overall educational goal?
Studying higher education has always been a value in of our society in Iran. I am trying striving to obtain the highest degree in my field in order to be satisfied in my life gain satisfaction and to obtain my dream to be of being a well-educated person. In order to reach this goal, the first step is a M.Sc. degree from such a well-accredited university which can will (can is not incorrect here but will conveys a stronger message it is less passive) help me to become be such a successful researcher in Mechanical Engineering in my country, Iran, in the near future. (though mentioning Iran in the previous sentence is not grammatically incorrect, it is redundant as you already stated that you are from Iran in the first sentence of this paragraph. In fact, it isn't really necessary to mention in my country at all since in the next paragraph you state that your intention is to return and pursue a career there.)
Also I also hold have plans regarding how I aim to use my degree in the long-term when I return to Iran. Those plans include using my research findings to establish my own manufacturing company, with the help of my father. because My father is an experienced person with extensive connections in my our city ,Kashan, and he is in a position to provide me with his full support in my researches. Alternatively, I really want to help students in Kashan University and Azad University of Kashan after my degree in Canada, because as my ties to these universities are strong because being that they are located in my hometown. and I really want think the students would benefit if I was able to share my scientific experience and knowledge with them.
In short, the Master's program at Concordia University -Canada- serves all of my important short, medium and long-term goals. I will invest all my efforts in research, and then upon my return to Iran to bring use what I have learned back and make more in order to make a significant contribution to my country specially my hometown, Kashan.
Why are you not pursuing a similar program in your country of residence/citizenship?
