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Taipei young designers' exhibition
Yesterday, I visited the Taipei Young designers' Exhibition at Taipei Trade Center near Taipei 101, there still filled thousands of people like before. I bring some old friends, the participate of that expo, some gifts, and bring my wish to them. Time past so fast, a year ago, I was the person who joined the ceremony, displayed and introduced my product there, but now, I become a guest and watch their most important moment happening.
2013년 5월 20일 오전 2:14
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Taipei young designers' exhibition
Yesterday, I visited the Taipei Young Designers' Exhibition at Taipei Trade Center near Taipei 101. There were thousands of people, like in the past. I brought some old friends who participate in the expo, some gifts, and good wishes to them. Time passed by so fast. A year ago, I was the person who joined the ceremony, displayed and introduced my product there. But now, I have become a guest and watch their most important moment happening.
2013년 5월 20일
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2013년 5월 20일
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