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I miss you my friend When I'm kid I meet my first friend. His house is in front of my house, Because my house very near and my face like him , my father think my friend is his son. We are doing much activities everyday almost never split, always together. When I don't know about something he told me how to do it, and sometimes we playing a video games. When we are teen , we never like that again although we same school and class. I don't know I change so much like this, and my Friend change so much like me too we are very different. And now he will go to another island for work, I miss you friend.
2013년 5월 23일 오후 3:57
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I miss you my friend

 

When I'm was a kid[better to write as "When I was little"], I meet met my first friend. His house is in the front of mine. my house, Because my house very As our homes are so near to each other and that we looked so much alike that my face like him , my father think my friend thought he was is his son!


We are doing much activities did everything together everyday and we are never apart from each other almost never split, always together.


When I don't know about how to do something, he told would show me. how to do it, and Sometimes we playing a would play video games. When we are became teenagers, , we never like that again drifted away even although we were in the same school and [understood!] class. I don't know I change so much like this, and my Friend change so much like me too we are very different don't how we could have changed so much and drifted so far apart... And now he will have to go to another island for work. I will miss you my friend.

 

Good essay!

2013년 5월 23일
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