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I wanna travel.. Well, summer is coming. A time for vacations and holidays will come soon. But not for me :) But anyway, I can dream, can’t I? So, firstly I’ll go to the USA, in NYC) City for romantics, city desires. All of us have seen Hollywood movies in the nineties and most of them were in this fairy city. So I just want to walk on the streets, visit the famous city’s districts like Queens. I will be in Chinese and Italian quarters and I won’t have to go to these countries in future, haha! After all, each state fits into NYC. I want to have a day at Central Park and I think it will be whole day, cause I know that Park is really huge. And then I want to go to «other» America. I will go to the ocean coast, in LA. There’s more relaxed and calm. And I’d like to imbibe Californian lifestyle. You know all there do sports, look good and want to be actors. So am I! I wonder if I can get to the casting :) Maybe I will be new Johnny Depp, who knows? :)))
2013년 5월 24일 오전 10:10
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I wanna travel..

Well, summer is coming. A time for vacations and holidays will come soon. But not for me :) But anyway, I can dream, can’t I?
So, firstly I’ll go to the USA, in to NYC). A city for romantics, a city of desires. All of us have seen Hollywood movies in from (<em>or</em> of) the nineties and most of them were in this fairy city (doesn't sound right - a common English term is <em>fair city</em>, but it is a little old fashioned and maybe not what you meant anyway.  I think it sounds better to just leave out the adjective). So I just want to walk on the streets, visit the famous city’s districts like Queens (careful here: <em>"...the famous city's districts...</em>" means that New York is famous; <em>"...the city's famous districts like Queens.</em>" means that the districts like Queens are famous). I will be in the Chinese and Italian quarters and I won’t have to go to these countries in future, haha! After all, each state fits into NYC.(??) I want to have a day at Central Park and I think it will be the whole day, because I know that Ppark is really huge.
And then I want to go to «other»?? (<em>do you mean</em> the other side of) America. I will go to the oceanWest (or Pacific) coast, in to LA. There’s it's more relaxed and calm. And (don't start a sentence with "And") I’d like to imbibe the Californian lifestyle. You know all everyone (or everybody) there does ("plays sport" sounds better) sports, looks good and wants to be actors. So am do I! I wonder if I can get to the a casting :) Maybe I will be new Johnny Depp, who knows? :)))

2013년 5월 25일
отличное фото)) и красивый рассказ, Артур))) Удачи на кастинге))
2013년 6월 1일
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