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When i fell in love with english I was thirteen years old and i spent all the afternoon playing video games ... one day meanwhile i was playing i decided to listen to a cd and i put a cd that my mother bought few weeks before. It was the Queen greatest hits! At the first time i listend only to "we will rock you" and "we are the champions", after one day i tried to listen the other songs and step by step i fall in love with Queen's music, Freddie's voice and Brian's guitar! But there was a problem ... what were the singing? What was the meaning of their songs? I didn't know! So i started to study their lyrics and onwards i learnt a little bit of english! :)
2013년 5월 24일 오후 10:15
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When I fell in love with English

I was thirteen years old and spent all the afternoon playing video games ... one day meanwhile while i was playing i decided to listen to a cd. and i put a cd that my mother bought few weeks before ago.
It was the Queen's greatest hits!
At the first time i listened only to "we will rock you" and "we are the champions", after one day i tried to listen the other songs and step by step slowly i fall in love with Queen's music, Freddie's voice and Brian's guitar!
But there was a problem ... what were they singing? What was the meaning of their songs? I didn't know!
So i started to study their lyrics and onwards i learnt a little bit of english! :)

 

Aside from capitalize the first letter of the sentence, you will also need to capitalize "I" and "English". I only corrected the first few "I" and "English". You get the drill :) 

 

2013년 5월 25일
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