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a big quarrel with my boyfriend I quareled with my boyfriend yesterday!and now we aren't reconciled ! we turn our back on each other! here is the things: my boyfriend cried out I made a mess in my room and throw my clothes and books around. I was angry with his unfriendly response to my questions.so we accused each other.I considered he didn't love me at all ,he never put up with me when we have contradiction.
2013년 5월 25일 오전 9:01
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a big quarrel with my boyfriend

I quareled with my boyfriend yesterday!

and now we aren't reconciled !

[*suggest* As of today, we still aren't back together.]

we turn our back on each other!

[*suggest* We are not talking to each other either]

here is the things:

[*suggest* Her is how the fight started.]

my boyfriend cried out

[*suggest* my boyfriend complained or yelled at me saying]

that I made a mess in my room and threw all throw my clothes and books around.

 

I was angry with his unfriendly response to my questions.

[*suggest* I was upset or unhappy and felt angry with his harsh or mean responses to my questions]

so we accused each made accusations. other He was upset with my messy room and I was upset with the unkind way he was answering my questions..

 

Based on this, I began to considered that he didn't love me anymore at all ,

 

I feel like he never put up with tries to work things out with me me when we have contradiction. or he never wants to work on a compromise together. [*suggestion* Whenever we have an argument or disagreement, it seems like it has to be his way or no way.


[*question? Is this the main point of your essay?]

Couples will always have disagreements, if a relationship is going to last, then it is important for us to be able to resolve our arguments in a respectful and kind (way *or* manner).  

 

 

2013년 5월 25일
He turns his back on you, gets upset with you, does not want to put up with you? That is not a good sign. Maybe you will find Mr. Perfect one day - but I doubt it.
2013년 5월 25일
So beautiful beauty Yeah, so how can he bully How about you.
2013년 5월 25일
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