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辩论会 A debate Recently, I have been thingking of how to improve my english. I have several ideas. First, read an english book, but i was too lazy that i haven't finished my first english book," eat、 pray、 love". Second, see a movie or watch a serial televition for several times to recite the subtitles down, but i was so curious about the drama and then i have watched more than 6 televisions, only to find that i learned to say "crap" and "shit" when i was in uncomfortable situations. Third, to communicate with many people in english, but i always easily forgot the new words and phrases they taught me, which made me feel terribly sorry. The guilty was like after the kind gave a piece of cake to me but i just threw it back. Too ashamed. So i am thinking a new idea---A debate. In a debate, it involes thingking, speaking, reading(searching for materials) and application, specially on different fields. So``` I need someone to quarrel with me!O(∩_∩)O~For anyone who also learns english or speak english and have some time to enjoy the beauty of applying english on debate. And anyone who learns chinese would like to try this way can tell me and let me see if i can find some partners for u. O(∩_∩)O~Best wishes

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辩论会 A debate

Recently, I have been thinking about how to improve my English. I have several ideas.

First, read an english book, but i was too lazy that i haven't finished my first english book," eat、 pray、 love".

Second, see a movie or watch a serial televition television series for several times to recite the subtitles down. But i was so curious about the drama that i have watched more than 6 televisions, only to find that i learned to say "crap" and "shit" when i was in uncomfortable situations.


Third, to communicate with many people in english. but i always easily forget the new words and phrases they taught me, which made me feel terribly sorry. The guilt was like after the kind gave a piece of cake to me but i just threw it back. Too ashamed.

So i am thinking a new idea---A debate. In a debate, it involves thinking, speaking, reading(searching for materials) and applying, specially on different fields. So```

I need someone to debate with me!O(∩_∩)O~For anyone who also learns english or speaks english and has some time to enjoy the beauty of applying english on debate.

Quarrel is an angry argument while debate is more of a discussion. So I think you are looking or debate rather than quarrel. 


3rd Person, so speaks/has


For your sentence, it is better to say, "for anyone who is learning ... " Same concept for the sentence below:


And anyone who learns chinese would like to try this way can tell me and let me see if i can find some partners for u. O(∩_∩)O~Best wishes

 

Comments: 

"i" should be capitalized even if it is not in the beginning of a sentence. 

"english" should be "English" because it is a proper noun. 

You have a tendency of grouping sentences together. It is better to break them them up into individual sentences. 

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