The reason,why i have mistakes in my writing.

Do you know writing is a difficult skill.It itself consists of set of four skills, which contains listening, speaking, reading and writing. And may be, I will spend all of my life in studying English. I really admire to western countries on their culture,because I think they are very excellent and they do everything professionally. My biggest dream is go to to go abroad to study masters in finance and learn new culture. When I walks on street in my city, I meets lot of foreigners, who are tourists in Vietnam. I really wants to talk to them and wants to guide them to visit some famous sites but i don't feel confident to go near and say 'Hello'.
I realized to write about my life, my hobbies and my emotions is easier than academic writing. Starting from today, I will try to write correct grammar and think deeply before I write. Only until I do write english regularly, I won't master this skill.
And now, I know how to start learning any skill. Only when you practice very much, you achieves what you want.

<em>Well done it's way better than your older ones. Keep it up. Good luck</em>

Thank for reading and fixing!

The reason why i have mistake in my writing.

Did you know writing is difficult skill in four skill which is included is listening, speaking, reading and writing. And mabe i will spend all of life to study English. I really admire to western countries with their culture because i think they are very excellent and they do everythings professionally. My biggest dream is go to abroad to study master in financial and know new culture. When i walked on street in my city, i met lots of foreign people who's tourist to Viet Nam. I really wanted to talk with them and wanted to guide them to visit some famous site but i felt not confident to near and say 'hello'.
I realize to write about my life, my hobby and my emotion is easier than academic writing. Starting today, i will try write correct grammar and think deeply before i write. Only until do i write english regularly, i will master in this skill.
And now, i know how to start any skill. Only when do you practice very much, i will achieve what you want

Thank for reading and fixing!

The reason why i have mistake in my writing.

Did you know writing is difficult skill in four skill which is included is listening, speaking, reading and writing. And maybe will spend all of life to study English. I really admire to western countries with their culture because i think they are very excellent and they do everythings professionally. My biggest dream is go to abroad to study master in financial and know new culture.

When i walked on street in my city, i met lots of foreign people who's tourist to Viet Nam. I really wanted to talk with them and wanted to guide them to visit some famous site but i felt not confident to near and say 'hello'.
I realize to write about my life, my hobby and my emotion is easier than academic writing. Starting today, i will try write correct grammar and think deeply before i write. Only until do i write english regularly, i will master in this skill.
And now, i know how to start any skill. Only when do you somethings by heart ,  you will achieve what you want

Thank for reading and fixing!