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My new necklace ! Yesterday my mother and I go shopping, see a lot of jewelry. My mom loves gold jewelry, but I compare like the jade. Look for a long time, finally, my mother gave me a Mickey Mouse, is made of gold, very cute, very good. (because my animals are the rat, so pick a Mickey Mouse) we ask the waiter to help put on-line, give me a good. Mother said "you're beautiful!"
2013년 6월 18일 오전 3:54
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My new necklace !

Yesterday my mother and I went shopping. We saw a lot of jewelry. My mom loves gold jewelry but I  like jade. We looked for a long time, finally, my mother gave me a Mickey Mouse made of gold. It is very cute and very good (because my animal is the rat I picked a Mickey Mouse).  We asked the waiter to help put on-line. Mother said "you're beautiful!"

2013년 6월 18일
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