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Can anyone see if the text is correct please? The aim of this project is creating a intervention proposal on a section of Barcelona's roman wall, the particular one at the Tower 33 in Traginers square, as the Final Degree project of Conservation and Restoration of Cultural Assets held by the University of Barcelona. The action proposal is based in a historical study of the tower followed by an organoleptic examination of the materials and its pathologies. Finally it concludes with the intervention process based on tests and analysis to determine the following restoration treatments. This research has allowed go deeper into the field of conservation of the architectural heritage, the history of monumental restoration in Barcelona and the acting methods in the stone materials.
2013년 6월 18일 오전 7:08
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Can anyone see if the text is correct please?

The aim of this project is to create a restoration project regarding  a section of Barcelona's Roman wall, in particular, Tower 33 in Traginers Square. This will be the basis of the Final Degree Project of Conservation and Restoration of Cultural Assets at the University of Barcelona.
The proposal  for  my action research is based on a historical study of  Tower 33 followed by an organoleptic examination of the materials used and its pathologies.

Finally, my project  will conclude with the intervention process based on tests and analysis to determine which restoration treatments will be needed. This research has allowed  me to go deeper into the field of conservation of Barcelona's  architectural heritage, the history of monument restoration in Barcelona and the techniques in the stone materials that were used.

2013년 6월 18일
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