Let's start All misfortune what we have, comes from desire happiness myself. And all happiness what we have, comes from aspiration happiness for others.

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Aleksey

2013년 6월 18일 오후 8:36

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All the misfortune that we have, comes from the desire for happiness for ourselves; and all the happiness that we have, comes from the aspiration towards happiness for others.

Just another option. Newgirl's correction is also perfectly correct.

2013년 6월 18일

Let's start,

all misfortune that we have comes from desiring happiness for ourselves,
and all happiness that we have comes from aspiring that others will be happy.

2013년 6월 18일

But what you believe in is very valuable.

2013년 6월 27일

Oh.... My level is very low (

2013년 6월 19일

All misfortune that we have, comes from desiring happiness for ourselves
and all happiness that we have, comes from aspiring that others will be happy.

2013년 6월 19일

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