A confusing novel Last month in Brazil ended a last novel wrote by an important brazilian writer. The novel was called "Salve Jorge" (meaning Save George). That story was about a catholic symbol a

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A confusing novel Last month in Brazil ended a last novel wrote by an important brazilian writer. The novel was called "Salve Jorge" (meaning Save George). That story was about a catholic symbol and had many critics about its intricate plots. The author, Gloria Perez, wrote so convoluted stories with too many twits and turns confusing all of the audience with completly irrelevant information. It was a biggest ruins of audience of all time in Brazil. Although, the author didn´t realized she needed to improve her story and she still thinking her novel was amazing. All the time she had gone to twitter to explain what the scenes represented and tryed to make the audience undestand it.

2013년 6월 18일 오후 11:22

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A confusing novel

Last month in Brazil ended a last novel was released, written by an important brazilian writer.

The novel was called "Salve Jorge" (meaning Save George). The story was about
a catholic symbol and had many criticized about its intricate plot. The author, Gloria Perez, wrote so convoluted stories with too many twists and turns confusing all of the audience with completely irrelevant information.

It was the biggest ruins dissapointment of audience of all time for the audience in Brazil. Although However, the author didn´t realize she needed to improve her story and she still thinks her novel was amazing. All the time she had gone to twitter She went on twitter all the time to explain what the scenes represented and tried to make the audience understand it.

Good job! Just a couple of verb tense problems and sentences that were flipped but those are little grammer problems. Overall, it was easy to understand what you want to say.

Keep up the good work :)

2013년 6월 19일

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