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The Positive effects of Globalization on the Culture Globalization is a process of linking up with people from varies countries, cultures, communications and businesses into one global melting pot. On the one hand, globalization can be understood as the development of hybrid cultures. It has allowed for people to be able to attain some products and services which was not available before. The globalization of fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels brings several pleasures to us. We can find Coca-Cola, McDonalds and KFC in most major cities throughout the world. People have many choices from different parts of the world, where cloths, foods and entertainment are concerned. For instance without going to another place, but we can enjoy foreign cuisines and try different clothes which are imports according to the own mood. To conclude, it seems to me that the advantages of globalization in terms of cultural habits are outweighed by the disadvantages. We should be happy with present life.
2013년 6월 19일 오전 10:25
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The Positive Effects of Globalization on the Culture

Globalization is a process of linking up with people from varies countries, cultures, communications and businesses into one global melting pot. On the one hand, globalization can be understood as the development of hybrid cultures. It has allowed for people to be able to attain some products and services which were not available before. The globalization of fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels brings several pleasures to us. We can find Coca-Cola, McDonalds and KFC in most major cities throughout the world.

People have many choices from different parts of the world, where clothes, food and entertainment are concerned. For instance without going to another place, but we can enjoy foreign cuisine and try different clothes which are imports according to the our own mood. To conclude, it seems to me that the advantages of globalization in terms of cultural habits are outweighed by the disadvantages. We should be happy with present life.

 

Food and cuisine normally have no separate plural form. When you say the advantages are outweighed by the disadvantages, it means the negatives are more than the positives and the overall result is negative. I think you may have meant the opposite since you only write about the positive aspects.

 

2013년 7월 2일
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