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The wedding. The wedding I have attended was last sunday in the afternoon from 4:00 pm to 8:00pm. It was the wedding of Andrea she's a friend of my family I ejoyed this wedding because it was in a wonderfull natural place the weather was warm and the ceremony was my favorite part because was a religious ceremony. The bride and groom were happy and the groom weared a beautiful blank dress she looks like amaizing. The bride weared an elegant suit. The food was delicious I ate and drunk many things. and another favorite part of my was when the people trowing rose petals the newly married couple at the end the ceromony at the end of the ceremony was fireworks certainly was the best weadding I've attended
2013년 6월 19일 오후 7:17
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The Wedding

 

The wedding I have attended went to was last Sunday was in the afternoon from 4:00 pm to 8:00 pm. It was the wedding of Andrea who she's is a friend of my family and I ejoyed this wedding because it was in a wonderfull wonderful, natural place and the weather was warm. and t The ceremony was my favorite part because it was a religious ceremony. The bride and groom were happy and the groom bride weared wore a beautiful blank white dress and she looks looked like amaizing amazing. The bride groom weared wore an elegant suit. The food was delicious. I ate and drunk many things. And another favorite part of my mine was when the people trowing threw rose petals to the newly married couple at the end the ceromony at the end of the ceremony was which was followed by fireworks. Certainly, it was the best weadding wedding I've attended so far.


Nice job! I think you meant that the bride wore a white gown and the groom wore an elegant, black suit, right? Hope this helps.


 

2013년 6월 20일
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