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Excess of everything is bad Excess of everything is bad. In our country weather of every seasons are horrible, like-excessive summers, winters and rains. This June month is generally happens very hot in most of the cities of our Country. Some days before we were so sick of summers that everyone was waiting to have rain. Now when it came, has created many problems for people, mostly people living in hill stations. It is raining so heavily there that flood has occured in these places. Most of the houses and places have washed away. Many people have lost their lilves. As now-a-days shcools, colleges are off. Mostly people have visited these places to spend their vacations, in addition to that just due to schorching summers people prefer to go to these places. There are many holystic places. So in these vacations people generally go there to have blessings of God. But who knew, this disaster is going to happen. Many pilgrims also have lost their lives, many who are alive,are stranded there, not able to come out of it. The govt. is running rescue operation, militrary has come to rescue them. May god help them who are stranded into this flood.
2013년 6월 20일 오전 6:50
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Excess of everything Anything in excess is bad

Excess of everything Anything in excess is bad. In our country, the weather is horrible of every season are horrible, like-excessive There are very long summers and winters and there is to much rain. This June month is generally happens is very hot in most of the cities of our country. Some days before, we were so sick of summers that everyone was waiting to have for the rain. Now when it came, has created many problems for people many problems appeared. Mostly people were living in hill stations (because of this, I think). It is raining so heavily there that flooding has occured in these places. Most of the houses and places have were washed away. Many people have lost their lilves. As now-a-days shcools From that moment, schools and colleges are off were closed. Mostly, people have had visited these places to spend their vacations. In addition to that, just due to schorching summers, people prefer to go to these places. There are many holystic places. So in these vacations, people generally go there to have be blessings blessed of by God. But who knew, this disaster is was going to happen. Many pilgrims also have lost their lives. many who Those that are alive, are stranded there, not able to come out of it leave. The govt. is running rescue operation, military has come to rescue them. May God help them who are those stranded into because of this flood.

 

I'm sorry about that! I hope everybody will be rescued soon!

2013년 6월 20일
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Excess of everything is bad

Excess of everything is bad. In our country weather of every seasons are horrible, like-excessive summers, winters and rains. This June month generally very hot in most of the cities of our Country. Some days before we were so sick BECAUSE OF/DUE TO THIS  summers that everyone was waiting FOR havING rain. Now when it came, has created many problems for people, mostly people living in hill stations. It is raining so heavily there that flood has occured in these places. Most of the houses and places have washed away. Many people have lost their lives. As now-a-days shcools, colleges are off. Mostly people have visited these places to spend their vacations, in addition to that just due to schorching summers people prefer to go to these places. There are many holistic places. So in these vacations people generally go there to have blessings of God. But who knew, this disaster is going to happen. Many pilgrims also have lost their lives, many who are alive,are stranded there, not able to come out of it. The govt. is running rescue operation, militrary has come to rescue them. May god help them who are stranded into this flood.

2013년 6월 20일
U WRITE QUITE WELL.........YOUR WORDS SELECTIONS ARE SO NICE.....I LIKED IT..........I HAVE DONE SOME CORRECTION ON YOUR NOTE..........PLEASE CHECKED OUT AND TELL ME.......ABOUT THAT..............:)....BECAUSE .I'M ALSO A LEARNER OF ENGLISH..........:)OK....:)
2013년 6월 20일
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