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The dating program Today the topic we discussed most on sina weibo is the TV dating program, Dating on Saturday, which is very famous in Shanghai. Because all the male participants on today's prgram come from our corporation. That means we are colleagues. Although the same corporation, they work on different areas. Some are IT engineers, some work on engineering design and some are in administrative positions. During the program, many interesting and funny things happened. We can't stop laughing when watching the program. However, the result is quite dramatical. A few boys and girls changed their minds when they made the final decisions. Love is always like this, gives us surprise and something unexpected. Some friends ask me why I did not take part in the program. Actually I am single and available now but the number of participants is limited. I should save the opportunity for elder colleagues. I belive she will appear in my life.

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The dating program

Today the topic we discussed most on sina weibo is the TV dating program, Dating on Saturday, which is very famous in Shanghai. Because ("We discussed this a lot because") All the male participants on today's program come from our corporation. That means we are colleagues. Although the same corporation, they work in different areas ( "departments"). Some are IT engineers, some work on engineering design and some are in administrative positions.

During the program, many interesting and funny things happened. We couldn't stop laughing when watching the program. However, the result was quite dramatic. A few boys and girls changed their minds when they made the final decisions. Love is always like this, it gives us surprises and something unexpected. ("Love always gives us surprises and unexpected outcomes")

Some friends ask me why I did not take part in the program. Actually, I am single and available now, but the number of participants ("the number of available spots for participants") was limited. I (thought I) should save the opportunity for my elder colleagues. I belive she (who? You should not use a pronoun as you have not mentioned 'her' before, maybe you could say "that special girl" or "that special someone") will appear in my life.

 

 

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Great job! The comments I put in brackets are my suggestions to make the story flow more naturally, it doesn't necessarily mean what you said was grammatically wrong. It's very interesting how popular dating shows are on Chinese TV. 加油!

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leave to opportunity to the ppl who really need!:D but it's said that many dating programs are not real

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