What life do I want to live

Now,  I am a graduate. I'd like to find what life I want to live. It  is necessary  find out.

 I like  the big city, because there is everything in it that  I want.

I can make friends with different provinces and different countries.

The most important thing is that the big city has passion and opportunity, just like Shanghai and Shenzhen, but first I need is the ability to support myself to live in those place and find out what is my goal.

   Johnathan:   Good essay.  Try not to run all of your thoughts together in  long sentences.

  Make your thoughts and sentences brief and to the point.--Warm Regards, Bruce