Studying Hard studying

In the summer holiday,i must hard studing because i must achieve my dreams .in short i want go to Tai wan 

在这个暑假里，我必须努力学习，因为我必须实现我的梦想，总之 我想去台湾

This summer holiday, I need to study hard.  This is because I need to realize my dream, to be able to to go to Taiwan.

studying Hard

this summer holiday,i need to study hard.this is because i need achieve my dreams to be
 abele to to go to Taiwan在这个暑假里，我必须努力学习，因为我必须实现我的梦想，总之 我想去台湾