dongyujiao1206
change As we known ,English is an important language. Everyone wants to learn it well. I also want to improve my spoken English. It's difficult for me to pronuciate every word into right pronuciation. What I really want is to become a good speaker. So my dear friends, could you please give me useful advice?
2013년 7월 18일 오후 2:41
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Greeting, I think it would sound better if you write it in this way;

 

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As we known <em>know</em>, English is an important language. Everyone wants to learn it well. I also want to improve my spoken English. <em>But the bottom line is</em>, it's <em>always</em> difficult for me to pronunciate every word into <em>the</em> right pronunciation. What I really want is, to become <em>being</em> a good speaker. So my dear friends, could you please give me some useful advice ?

 

Good luck :)

2013년 7월 18일
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