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Family trip
Today I went to the beach with my family. Though,I have gone to the beach for many times, I felt more happy this time, because my brother traveled with us, haha. My brother is humours humorous and funny. He always makes fun with us and I like him. (The first part of this sentence is repetitive. You can make the statement "I like him" be a sentence on it's own, or add a comma after funny and add it to the previous sentence.)
The beach is beautiful, but the seawater is salty. Wwe played in the sea. At the begainning, I was afraid of the sea waves, but after awhile I enjoyed them gradually,haha. Then we went to have dinner. I tasted many delicious and special (delicious and special are adjectives, try adding what you ate. Ex. many delicious and special foods, ... ), so I am very full now.
Today I was very tired, but happy. I liked the interesting trip, and I like to travel with my family very much. Most importantly, I love my family, hahahahaha...
Your trip to the beach sounded like a lot of fun!!
There are a few things to remember:
1) Put spaces after periods and commas. (One space after a comma, and two after a period).
2) Plurals. There are several exceptions to this rule, but most words have a "s" or "es" after to show when it's more than one. ex. wave or waves.
3) a little note between American English, and British English. Some words are spelled slightly differently. ex. American: humorous, British: humourous. Amer.: color, Br: colour. It depends on where you are, and which one you are learning.
I hope this helps.
Family trip
Today I went to beach with my family. Although I have gone to the beach for many times, but I felt more happy this time, because my brother traveled with us, haha. My brother is humourous and funny. He always makes fun with us and I like him.
The beach is beautifu,l but the seawater is salty. We played in the sea. At the begaining, I was afraid of the sea waves but I enjoyed them gradually, haha. Then we went to have dinner. I tasted many delicious and special things, so I am very full now.
Today I was very tired but happy. I liked the interesting trip and I like to travel with my family very much. Most importantly, I love my family,hahahahaha...
[Good work. Remember to put a space after all periods and commas. Also, you can say "Although I have..., I felt..." OR "I have gone..., but I felt..." You can have 'although' or 'but', but not both.]
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