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My hedgehog Hello! My name is Natalia. I am from Russia. I am starting to learn English. I want to tell you about my hedgehog. It's name Elizabet. It lives with me over 2 years. It is dwarf eared hedgehog from South Africa. It looks like mouse, only with thorns. It very loves to eat delicious food. Cutlet, cakes and fruits are loving food. One day I decided to study embroided. I wanted to embroided portret my Elizabed. Three days I was doing portret. But became weekends. Every weekend I and my friends plays volleyball. And in this sunday we played too. During the game I broke my finger on my hand. Gips. Three weeks gips would be on my arm. I am not sad. I decide to embroider my hedgehog one arm. Embroider was very slowly. I embroided all day. But evening I saw that I sew down my picture to my gips ))
2013년 8월 29일 오후 4:33
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My hedgehog

Hello! My name is Natalia. I am from Russia. I am starting to learn English.

I want to tell you about my hedgehog. It's name Elizabet. It has lived with me over 2 years. It is a dwarf-eared hedgehog from South Africa. It looks like mouse, only with thorns. It very loves to eat delicious food very much. Cutlet, cakes and fruits are loving foods that she espcecially loves.

One day I decided to study embroidery. I wanted to embroider a portrait of my Elizabet. I worked on the portrait for three days I was doing portret. However, then it became the weekend. Every weekend, my friends and I play volleyball. And in this Sunday, we played, too. During the game I broke my finger on my hand. Gips. Three weeks Gips would be on my arm for three weeks. I was not sad. I decided to embroider my hedgehog with just one arm. Embroidering went very slowly. I embroidered all day. But when evening came, I saw that I had sewn down my picture to my gips ))

 

<em>[Good story.  Were you able to tell your hedgehog from your pin cushion? ;-)]</em>

2013년 8월 29일
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My hedgehog

Hello! My name is Natalia. I am from Russia. I am starting to learn English.

I want to tell you about my hedgehog. Her name is Elizabet. She has lived with me for over 2 years. It is dwarf eared hedgehog from South Africa. It looks like a mouse, only with thorns. It loves to eat delicious food. Cutlet, cakes and fruits are her favourite food. 
One day I decided to study embroidery. I wanted to embroider a portrait of my Elizabed. Three days I was doing it. Then came the weekend. Every weekend I and my friends play volleyball. And this Sunday we played too. During the game I broke my finger. Plaster of Paris.* Three weeks PoP would be on my arm. I was not sad. I decided to embroider my hedgehog using one arm. I embroidered very slowly and all day. In the evening I saw that I sewn my picture onto my PoP))

*or, gypsum

very well written!

2017년 3월 29일
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