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Today Hello. I have been all the in my house. I am doing some homework due to next Wednesday. What I have to do is to write an outline for a persuasive essay. I am going to write about the negative effects that fast food chain restaurants have in society. I think they are quite bad for society. I am also watching some videos about dollarization because my partner and I have to do a persuasive speech. I have to confess that I am having trouble preparing the opening or hook of the speech. So, if you have any suggestion,(should I write suggestionS)? ...I will give you a candy. LOL I can't, but I will if I could.

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Hello. I have been all the in my house I have been stuck inside all day. I am doing some homework that's due to next Wednesday. What I have to do is to write an outline for a persuasive essay. I am (I'm) going to write about the negative effects that fast food chain restaurants have on society. I think they are (they're) quite bad for society. I am (I'm) also watching some videos about dollarization because my partner and I have to do a persuasive speech. I have to confess that I am (I'm) having trouble preparing the opening or hook of the speech. So, if you have any suggestions, I will give you a candy. LOL I can't, but I would if I could.

 

ahah eres gracioso :) bien hecho y suerte con tu ensayo/discurso. Segura que todo sera un exito!

Hay un libro en ingles que habla del mismo tema que se llama Fast Food Nation: The Dark Side of the All-American Meal por Eric Schlosser si te interesa.

Tambien puedes enviarme un mensaje si tienes dudas o quieres ayuda con algo! Saludos!


Nota: me di cuenta que en tus entradas casi no usas las contracciones. Te recomiendo que las usen. Es mas comun y natural decir "I'm" en vez de "I am" o "They're" en vez de "they are". Todo el mundo las dicen y suena menos formal! 

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