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Nothing Succeeds Like the Appearance of Success
Nothing succeeds like the appearance of success
Throughout the ages, great figures have been playing a crucial part in pushing our society forward. Taking Steve
Jobs as an example, he, the founder of the Apple company, made computers personal and put the internet in our
pockets, which transformed our lives and changed the way each of us sees the world.
Successful people have much in common on the road to success. Just like Thomas Edison said,"If you wish to
succeed , you should use persistence as your good friend , experience as your reference , prudence as your
brother and hope as your sentry.''It reminds me of one thing I feel very proud of. It happpened in my first year in
college. I wished to reading English books with my classmates after jogging in the morning. At the second day, I
spoke my minds to them and then organised the activty which lasted 2 months. At the end of that semester, we
got good grades and pull together more. The result was very pleasant and my self-confidence greatly increased.
Of course, the opportunity is also very important. I totally agree swift horse also need Bole. The success
of the road is so long, and if you meet the Bole, he is your opportunity to help you to succeed. He will appreciate
your talents, and you just try your best. Then that you become a successful person is just a matter of time.
Hi, guys, this's my postgraduate composition my English teacher asked us to write. Please help me and correct it. Thanks a lot.
2013년 9월 26일 오후 3:42
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Steve Jobs was an *sshole! Read this: [http://www.kuro5hin.org/story/2013/4/7/03553/03938]
2013년 9월 26일
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