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Rina
I'm glad because I was said my journal is interesting by new friend on italki:) 11th October I sang a karaoke with visitors and was fun. A lot of us talked. 12th My cousin became pregnant. She is age same as me. Though I am glad and a little bit enviable. 13th I met Wakana for the first time. She is a very beautiful woman and I made friend immediately. 14th My mom and I went shopping and she bought cosmetics for me. After that, we went to my dad's office and did driving and fishing with him. But we cannot to get fish even one.
2013년 10월 14일 오전 11:37
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I'm glad because, I was said told that my journal is interesting by a new friend on italki:)

11th October

I sang a karaoke with visitors and it was fun.
A lot of us talked.

12th
My cousin got became pregnant.             //most people would say "got" instead of "became"
She is the same age same as me.
Though I am glad and a little bit enviable.  envy.

13th
I met Wakana for the first time.
She is a very beautiful woman and we became I made friends immediately.

14th
My mom and I went shopping and she bought cosmetics for me.
After that, we went to my dad's office and did droved and fished with him.
But, we could not even catch a single fish. cannot to get fish even one.

2013년 10월 16일
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