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My friend Valeria has been my best friend since 8 years ago. We knew each other in the school, and she always had a lot of boyfriends! She’s very pretty, and she has a big blue eyes and long brown hair, but her personality is what makes her different and special. At first glance, she seems rude and serious, but she has other good qualities! She’s really generous and helpful. She’s always spending time with me when I have problems, for example. Also, she’s practical , so she gives me good tips! But I can talk about her defaults! Ok, for example, she’s pretty mean, she’ll never invite you to the movies! Also, she’s completely impatient - if we do an exam, she needs to know the outcome already! Sometimes she drives me mad!

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