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Dear all Stop Bullshiting if You Are Doing It Right Now :P There are moments in your life that you wish time stops for a while, Sometimes, time goes faster than you, and you just want to shout at it, and say that” hey time, damn you! stop for a while, I want to live my life “! You want it to stop, but it never does. So you ask yourself:” if it is my own life why can’t I walk a little bit slower? “, then you find yourself surrounded by scheduled obligations like job, university stuff, etc. Obligations are sometime good though, they compel you to get moving! There are also moments when you have to teach and convince yourself, that there are people out there who simply lie, and things get worse when you have to convince yourself that the number of them is not few! You should teach yourself that there are people who abuse your sincerity and also there are people who even feel pride for being talented to bullshit others. Those are people who make the earth empty of sincere people! I believe mankind knows perfectly about humanity and morality when he is a child and as he grows up, world just keeps telling him:,” forget about them all and just think about survival”. And this is time when you see people saying things like: “we are all alone”,“ I don’t believe in love”, “ life goal is just survival” , “ I am not interested in friendship” , “ love is lie” ,etc!

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Dear all Stop Bullshiting if You Are Doing It Right Now :P

There are moments in your life that you wish time stops for a while,
Sometimes, time goes faster than you, and you just want to shout at it, and say that” hey time, damn you! stop for a while, I want to live my life “!
You want it to stop, but it never does.
So you ask yourself:” if it is my own life why can’t I walk a little bit slower? “, then you find yourself surrounded by scheduled obligations like job, university stuff, etc.
Obligations are sometime good though, they compel you to get moving!

There are moments in your life that you wish time would stop for a while, Sometimes(no comma) time goes faster than you, and you just want to shout at it, and say that” hey time, damn you! Stop for a while awhile, I want to live my life “! You want it to stop, but it never does. So you ask yourself:” if it is my own life why can’t I walk a little bit slower? “, then you find yourself surrounded by scheduled obligations like a job, university staff, etc. Obligations are sometime good though, they compel you to get moving!

 

When you use "awhile" to mean "a short time" it is one word.

Job needs an article or a possesive pronoun in front of it. You would never say "I go to job", you say "I go to my job", "I'm going find a job" rather than "I'm going to find job", so it should be "obligations like a job" "your job", "my job".

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There are also moments when you have to teach and convince yourself, that there are people out there who simply lie, and things get worse when you have to convince yourself that the number of them is not few!

You should teach yourself that there are people who abuse your sincerity and also there are people who even feel pride for being talented having talent to bullshit others(sounds better to me). Those are people who make the earth empty  void of sincere people!


I believe mankind knows perfectly about humanity and morality when he is a child and as he grows up, the world just keeps telling him:,” forget about them all and just think about survival”. And this is a time when you see people saying things like: “we are all alone”,“ I don’t believe in love”, “ life's goal is just survival” , “ I am not interested in friendship” , “ love is lie”, etc!

 

 

Watch those articles (a/an/the)

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Come to think of it you would not say "I am talented to bullshit others." rather it would be "I have a talent for bullshitting others" You could however say "People feel pride for being talented in bullshitting others" It's really just a preposition problem. A person is talented "in" not "to". I am talented in science. I am talented in bullshitting people. Make sense

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Sorry I'm missed one thing. The word sometimes need an "s" on the end.

 

There are moments in your life that you wish time would stop for a while, Sometimes(no comma) time goes faster than you, and you just want to shout at it, and say that” hey time, damn you! Stop for a while awhile, I want to live my life “! You want it to stop, but it never does. So you ask yourself:” if it is my own life why can’t I walk a little bit slower? “, then you find yourself surrounded by scheduled obligations like a job, university staff, etc. Obligations are sometimes good though, they compel you to get moving!

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