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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i have to study english because i would like to work abroad as engineer. by the way english is the most spoken language in the world and i m going to take IELTS next months.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I have to study English because I would like to work abroad as an engineer. by the way Also English is the most spoken language in the world and I'm going to take IELTS next months.

Good luck in the test! If you have any questions you can ask me.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i have to study English because I would like to work abroad as engineer. By the way english is the most spoken language in the world and I'm going to take IELTS next months.

Great.  Just study capitalization (yes it matters).  Good job!
Red                  = Capitalization
Blue                =  Correction and Spelling
Green               =  A more natural way to say / more common
Purple               =  My comment or suggestion
Underline          =  Punctuation and/ or  spacing

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