Chinese Cuisines

China has 8 eight major regional cuisines, including ranging from the heavy spiciness of Sichuan cuisine and to the light and dainty morsels of Canton cuisine. Chinese restaurants enjoy great popularity all over the world. With the ever-changing Chinese lifestyle, however, people we are experiencing a new diet style either when of cooking at home or eating out at restaurants. For instance, the cheese and tomato sauce are added to the traditional Chinese food; urban consumers now frequently go to for fast food chains, such as like those from McDonald's and KFC. The steady growth of people's in income, much better knowledge about on international foods and the convenience of shopping in supermarkets shopping bring brought forth the an emergence of a new generation of consumers who are more likely to buy packaged and canned already prepared food [or "food on the go"].

Chinese Cuisines

China has 8 major cuisines, including spicy Sichuan cuisine and light Canton cuisine. Chinese restaurants enjoy great popularity all over the world. With the ever-changing Chinese lifestyle, however, people are experiencing a new diet style of diet either when cooking at home or eating at restaurants. For instance, the cheese and tomato sauce are has been added to the traditional Chinese food; urban consumers now frequently go to fast food chains, such as McDonald's and KFC. The steady growth of people's income, much a greatly increased knowledge about of international food and the convenience of supermarket shopping bring has brought forth the emergence of a new generation of consumers who are more likely to buy packaged and canned food.

I'm not sure what kind of register you are aiming at. The start seems dynamic like an article while the end is extremely formal and sounds more like a scientific investigation. 

But you have a great control of langauge, vocabulary and expressions. Well corrected. Reads very naturally.