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Help me to correct this please :) Hi, I'm poppy. Today I will tell you something about my favorite singer. So, do you know who "Taylor Swift" is ? I think, most of you've known her. Yes, she is my one and only favorite singer. Her genre is country. Her complete name is Taylor Alison Swift, her father is Scott Kingsley Swift and her mother is Andrea Finlay Swift. She also has a cute brother named Austin Swift. I have so many reasons for idolizing her. She is really down-to-earth, kind-hearted, cute, beautiful, super talented, silly, funny, friendly to her fans and many more. Taylor writes her own songs, she plays guitar and piano, she also has a good talent at acting, and she once wrote a novel when she was 12 years old. How awesome she is! What a smart country singer. Her songs have inspired so many people including me. I mean she gave me a confidence to deal with my problems through her songs. She is amazing, isn’t she? I actually love all of her songs from her albums. Don't ever ask me to choose, because I can't. She always does her best. She sold out more than 26 million albums, 75 million songs have been downloaded, and she always get her song number 1 in 50 countries. She has named as "The Most Charitable Celebrity". Why? That’s because she raised $750.000 for tornado victims with benefit concerts, and also raised millions for Nashville flood relief. She once got an award from Michelle Obama, called "The Biggest Help Award" in 2012. Unlike other celebrities who love to spend their time in night club, Taylor prefers to watch TV, or plays with her cat, Meredith. She also loves baking cookies and cooking, she confirmed it through the interview. According to Taylor’s best friends, her cooking is completely delicious. I really want to meet her. Someday, I hope she will come to Indonesia and do a concert. Amen that's all about Taylor Swift :)
2013년 12월 14일 오전 5:32
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Help me correct this please! :)

Hi, I'm Poppy. Today I will tell you something about my favorite singer.

So, do you know who "Taylor Swift" is? I think most of you've known her. Yes, she is my one and only favorite singer. Her genre is country.
Her complete name is Taylor Alison Swift, her father is Scott Kingsley Swift and her mother is Andrea Finlay Swift. She also has a cute brother named Austin Swift.
I have so many reasons for idolizing her. She is really down-to-earth, kind-hearted, cute, beautiful, super talented, silly, funny, friendly to her fans, and much more.
Taylor writes her own songs, plays guitar and piano, has a good talent at acting, and once wrote a novel when she was 12 years old. How awesome she is! What a smart country singer.
Her songs have inspired so many people, including me. I mean, she gave me a confidence to deal with my problems through her songs. She is amazing, isn’t she?
I actually love all of her songs from her albums. Don't ever ask me to choose, because I can't.
She always does her best. She sold more than 26 million albums, 75 million songs have been downloaded, and she always gets her song number 1 in 50 countries. She is named as "The Most Charitable Celebrity".
Why? That’s because she raised $750,000 for tornado victims with benefit concerts, and also raised millions for Nashville flood relief. She once got an award from Michelle Obama, called "The Biggest Help Award" in 2012.
Unlike other celebrities who love to spend their time in night clubs, Taylor prefers to watch TV, or play with her cat, Meredith. She also loves baking cookies and cooking, she confirmed it through an interview. According to Taylor’s best friends, her cooking is completely delicious.

I really want to meet her. Someday, I hope she will come to Indonesia and do a concert. Amen.
That's all about Taylor Swift. :)

2013년 12월 14일
Aww same here rebecca i lover her so much! xx
2013년 12월 14일
I love her also~ I can sing every song from her. She's amazing.
2013년 12월 14일
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