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Hi, I'm from Paris and I am French. I want to be fluent in English and maybe meet some cool people. I have trouble with oral comprehension and with expressing my thoughts (verbally? on paper?). This year, I went to Miami, south Florida, Stockholm (Sweden), and London. Next year, I will discover Venice and will go to Stockholm twice. Why Stockholm? Because I love Melodifestivalen, a show to choose the singer to be sent to the Eurovision Song Contest.

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not easy to leave this first message

Hi, I'mFrench -- from Paris. I want to be fluent in English and maybe meet cool people. I have difficulties with my oral comprehension and also with expressing my thoughts. This year, I went to Miami and south of Florida, Stockholm (Sweden) and London for instance. Next year I will discover Venice and (will) go twice at to  Stockholm twice  (or "make to trips to Stockholm"). Why Stockholm ? Because I love Melodifestivalen, it's a show to choose the singer sent to Eurovision.