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I forget...
When you study another language, you should revise materials from time to time and devote spare time to learning; do not waste any opportunity. I have been working for a half an year to acheive something in English. Now I don't have time to study English and I can't remember some of the significant things. It disturbs me that I can't change anything though. It is torturous to lose all what that which I have you worked for.
I forget...
When you study another language you should revise materials from time to time and devote spare time to learning without wasting any opportunity. I have been working for half a year to get better at English. Now I don't have time for studying English and I can't remember many significant things. It disturbs me I can't change anything though. It is torture to lose all what you work for.
Hey Julia, nice job! I made a few changes to make your work sound more fluent. I know how you feel about forgetting English, because the same thing is happening to me and other languages. Good luck!
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