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Free Write This month is chinese festival--Spring Festival.I feel the Spring Festival is so exceptional.Because it's a quite spring festival.So, what do you think about it? This month is so hot.I always think It's not Spring Festival but summer.And how about your country?Is it hot too?or humid?or pour?Any way,i like breezy.And you?

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This month is Chinese Spring Festival. I feel the Spring Festival is exceptional because it's usually, a quite typically Spring festival. What do you think?

This month is so hot. I think that this year, it's not really a Spring Festival but more like a Summer Festival. What about your country? Is it also hot, humid or pouring with rain? Anyway, I prefer breezy conditions, How about you?

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This month is a Chinese festival; The Spring Festival. I feel the Spring Festival is so exceptional. Because it's a very spring-like festival. So, what do you think about it?

This month is so hot. I always think It's not the Spring Festival but the summer. And How about your country? Is it hot too?, or humid?, or pour too rainy? (if you mean it rains too much, then it would be better to say "or too rainy". The word 'pour' is a verb, while the word 'rainy' is an adjective." Any way, I like breezy weather. And How about you?

 

Breezy weather is awesome. 

 

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