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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i'm a chinese girl,and i 'm now in Shenzhen.I want to make friends all over the world,especially those who speak English,because i 'm gonna to improve my oral English.If u wanna learn Chinese,or u wanna make friends with me,i would love to .

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself


I'm a Chinese woman and I live in i 'm now in Shenzhen.  I want to make friends all over the world, especially with people who speak English, because I want to improve my conversational English skills.  If you would like to learn Chinese,or if you want to wanna make friends with me I would love that.

 
Red                  = Capitalization
Blue                 =  Correction and Spelling
Green               =  A more natural way to say / more common
Purple               =  My comment or suggestion
Underline          = Punctuation and/ or  spacing
 
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i'm a chinese girl and i live in Shenzhen.I want to make friends all over the world,especially wtith those who speak English,because i 'm gonna to improve my conversational English.If u want to learn Chinese,or u wanna make friends with me,i would love that.

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