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Home,home After 3 months' work in Shenzhen, i finally will go back to my hometown in 2 weeks. How excited i am. I miss my parents, miss the delicious food,miss my best friends.Please wait for me,my wonderful life in Enshi.

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Enshi is a nice name for a place :).

Home,home

In another 2 weeks, I will finally be going back to my hometown in 2 weeks after 3 months of working in Shenzhen . I am very excited. I miss my parents, I miss the delicious food, (usually we would put an and here too, unless going for an artistic effect in the sentence) I miss my best friends. Please wait for me, my wonderful life in Enshi.
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Home,home

After 3 months' work in Shenzhen, I'll finally will go back to my hometown.  I'll leave 2 weeks from now.   in 2 weeks. I am so excited. I miss my parents, the delicious food and I miss my best friends. Please wait for me, my wonderful life in Enshi.

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