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I'm new!! Hi there, II'm Yanira, from the Canary Islands, Spain. I'm here because I would like to improve my English and meet new people. English is a lingua franca and it is necessary for everything: job, computers, understanding songs, travelling, meeting foreign people... I hope this place will help me to improve my level of English and, in any case, I hope I will help people to improve their Spanish. Here we go!!!

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I'm new!!

Hi there,
I'm Yanira, from the Canary Islands, Spain. I'm here because I would like to improve my English and meet new people. English is a lingua franca and it is necessary for everything: job, computers, understanding songs, travelling, meeting foreign people...
I hope this place will help me to improve my level of English and, in any case, I hope I will help people to improve their Spanish. Here we go!!!

 

Your English is perfect! Except for that one typo, I could not find any mistakes in your message. :-)

 

One thing I would recommend, although it isn't a mistake... when refering to people who are not from the same country as yourself, I think it is more respectful to say "people from other countries" rather than "foreign people".

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